He is objecting to the changes.
Basically, a student read the document for me, modified it, and it got sent back, the Tech Author then threw a hissy fit and commented all the student's changes with sarcastic comments. The student is a 21 yr old Canadian, I am selling my product to Canadian squaddies, who I reckon will be early 20s, mostly. If the student can't understand it, then, neither will the squaddie. You would think the TA would want that sort of feedback.
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'Battery' and 'locking' repeated twice in the same sentance - bad english
I'm not sure I could take advice on language from someone who can't spell sentence, can't be arsed to capitalise a proper noun, uses a hyphen as a dash and apostrophes as quotation marks. Tell him to GTFF.
Also: capitalising non-proper nouns is stupid. This manual isn't the fucking Bible.[/quote]
Quite. I wouldn't mind him being a pompous arse, if was a correct pompous arse.